John Holland writes.

Short fiction writer, events organiser, editor, publisher and obsessive

'Booboo' wins THIRD PRIZE in the Retreat West Short Story Competition

Delighted that my story ‘Booboo’ has won THIRD PRIZE in the 2020 Retreat West Short Story Competition. That’s £150 plus a place in their forthcoming print anthology. It’s all here.

This is what judge Peter Jordan had to say about ‘Booboo’ and his decision to award it Third Prize -

I chose ‘Booboo’ because the story is possibly the simplest with regards to both prose and story. In many ways ‘Booboo’ is the perfect template for a short story. Start late, leave early. Keep it simple. Have the surface story allude to bigger things — in this case, the mother’s new partner and how that affects her young daughter.